Saturday, March 26, 2011

Blog - Slam Poem


So, the following words are my slam poem. I read my slam poem aloud as if I were performing it in class and it recorded a few seconds over 3 minutes so I assume my slam poem is admissible. I hope all of you have fun reading it. Enjoy!

GOD, WHERE ARE YOU?
By: Kevin Rickman

God, where are you?
If you can hear my words,
please respond.
You know what I am.
You know what I’ve been through.
You know what my dreams, goals, and passions consist of.
Answer me
because I happen to be
only one of the five billion believers
that you have amassed over the centuries.
My belief in you has been genuine.
It has been real and sincere and true
since the first moment I was introduced to you.
But, God, I must confess that
my acceptance of your actions is decreasing,
my trust in your ideas is dwindling,
and my belief in you as a supreme being is diminishing.
God, why do you not answer my prayers?
If you can hear me,
just answer one plea.
I only desire love,
seek support,
and require guidance.
I ask you kindly,
I ask you politely,
and I ask you wisely.
I live up to my potential in life
and make certain that
I am the best person that I can be
to my friends and family
and to all the strangers who surround me.
And yet in return, you bestow me with emptiness.
God, why do you permit such calamities
to impact your people and societies?
If you can hear me,
extirpate all hatred, famines, and poverty.
Rid your world of all diseases, death, and destruction.
Terminate all the wars, violence, crime, torture and corruption
that have been thrashing your people
since the commencement
of your existence.
God, why do you deprive certain communities
of their innate rights as citizens of humanity?
If you can hear me,
please agree with me
when I asseverate that
women merit all the opportunities
to choose their actions pertaining to their bodies.
And that it’s contemptible to say
that being gay
is immoral and a threat.
My gay friends only want to marry,
start a family,
and share the same, exact feeling of love and affection
that my straight friends undoubtedly share together.
Cease ignoring me
and begin answering me
because, God, I cannot wait much longer.
I’m disheartened when I go to church searching for you,
dejected when I read the Bible expecting to find you,
and dispirited when I pray to you
helplessly and hopelessly
to ameliorate the issues confronting me.
But believe me, God, I do not want to corroborate
all the atheists and all the agnostics and all the scientists
attempting to disprove of your existence.
Please, demonstrate to these individuals that
they are the ones who are wrong and that
you are the one who is right.
And, God, heed my words with caution
whether you’re sitting in that corner
or sitting over there in that corner
or standing right in front of me
or standing right behind me
or looking down upon me
as these words flow out of my mouth
because, God, I can guarantee that
you will have one less believer if
my prayers continue to be disregarded,
all global dilemmas continue to unravel,
and the rights of innocent individuals continue to be withdrawn
right before my eyes.
God, you have failed me.
But no, I refuse to cease believing just yet in you.
Please, please, please
I beg of you
to answer my query:
God, where are you?

9 comments:

  1. Beautiful. I can imagine how even more powerful this would be performed. My favorite part, as a creative writer myself is your decreasing, diminishing, and dwindling part. But of course, the whole thing is wonderfully written, and you have such honest things to say that I'm sure the majority of people wonder at some point in time.

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  2. Hey Dominique! Thanks for the compliments! It’s a topic that really concerns me so I ended having lots of fun emitting my true emotions and feelings to compose it. And yeah, you’re right. Most people whom I know have wondered whether God truly exists or not. As you can probably imagine, it’s quite an interesting topic to discuss.

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  3. This is fabulous. It was really genuine, and that made it really easy to read. I could really feel the emotion in it. Wonderful job, and I hope I can hear it performed eventually. Superb!

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  4. Hey Megan! Thanks for the thoughtful words! I'll perform my slam poem in class tomorrow if the rest of our classmates share the same sentiment.

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  5. I love this. I felt your deep connection with God as I was reading your poem. Great effort, and you did an amazing job.

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  6. bravo my good friend, very deep and passionate, and i beleive it can connect with everyone in our class.

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  7. Kevin this is amazing! You really got me thinking about everything you wrote. I honestly can’t wait to hear you perform it and hear the tone and see the expressions you put along with your remarkable writing.

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  8. Son, first of all let me just say Great SLAM poem, you really took it home with this one. As i read this i could feel the energy in between the words, very powerful. Furthermore, i have to agree with you 100%, is time for light to be shed upon our prayers, is time for some truth realism, and work to be done. This is certainly a impacting statement, and it has made me think. Keep up the good work and hope to see you before our class performing it out for all of us.

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  9. KAREN – Thank you! I’m so happy that you could sense my connection with God while reading the slam poem. That’s exactly the sentiment I was trying to impart and I’m glad it worked.

    TOM – Thanks old buddy. I always enjoy receiving compliments from childhood friends. Yeah, I agree with you about the slam poem connecting with everyone. That’s one of the main reasons why I choose to write about this topic: both believers and non-believers can relate to it in some way or another.

    TRICIA – Thank you! Your words made me smile. Yay, I’m happy I got you thinking about the topic (that was one of my primary goals). I hope my performance of the slam poem met your expectations today.

    JOSE – Thanks dude! I really appreciate the comments you left. I’m so happy that you felt the energy I was trying to impart. It lets me know that the slam poem, overall, was a success. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. And, like I said to Tricia above, I hope my performance of the slam poem met your expectations.

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